Moments 3
It seems like you initially spotted some errors in the chapter, but upon further review, you're not noticing as many grammatical mistakes. The story itself is engaging, and you believe it has the potential to become even better. You encourage others to give it a try, hinting at the excitement and improvement awaiting them within the narrative.
This book has been deleted.
"The black mass of energy, strong enough to destroy the whole world, collided with the red domain.
DEVIL'S CONTRACT
Fantasy · Mask_Kk