chocolate_lover44

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I don't think the author will follow this path. The "Will of the World" plot has become too cliche. I think the Will of the World was helping Luffy achieve his dream, but in an indirect way (it can't interfere directly). This "Will of the World" can be called... The "plot", because Luffy was an MC before Ren was reincarnated into this world.

ch 89 [89] Fall of God[1]

One Piece:The Lust System

Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey

chocolate_lover44

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ch 89 [89] Fall of God[1]

One Piece:The Lust System

Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey

chocolate_lover44

1mth

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Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.