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My thoughts on this novel? The writing quality, is pretty good, remind me of a lot of high quality hardcover books, though I gave a 4 because of some few misspells and grammatical error, but it's nothing major. The story development is pretty great tbh, the story always moves forward with each chapter, but some chapters are just the characters relaxing and talking, which I really like, cause the characters get to build themselves and relationships with these moments, that's why I gave a 5. Which brings me to character design, I absolutely love the characters, most especially Celine, they all seem so lively and rich in their own rights, so I had to give this part a 5, the author is very good with the characters aspect. Update stability, 5, the author literally doesn't miss a day. And last, I have world and background a 4 because, well, so far the world is pretty incredible, the whole aspect of Alpha of Alphas, power sharings between different packs once together in matrimony and what not, it's all really incredible, but there is just a minute detail, hence the reason for my 4. Which is the humans, I have yet to know how the humans fair in this world, I don't know if humans know about the existence of wolves and if they don't, how have they been kept a secret when the wolves seem to take up half the population of the world according to what I've read. But I'm sure the author will address this, other than that, I thought the world building was pretty great. Overall an incredibly entertaining novel and definitely worth the read, good work author and I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds. 🙂🙂

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