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Weakly, the main character hides his powers, why? If Payne is even physically stronger than the same Almighty, and if you use Rinnegan's abilities, he will absolutely become the strongest and invincible.

Michikatsu Tsugikuni - Kokushiba.

Alas, the author, but this is very bad. The author does not know how to choose the right characters, Kokushibyou and Naruto are just a "brilliant" combination. He has a "Breath of the Moon" style, and it is logical that it should be at least somewhat connected with the Moon, for example, Ootsutsuki Toneri was well suited instead of Naruto.

This automatically makes the main character very strong. And this means a drop in development in the magical world, it will not be necessary, you can achieve six paths and travel to another world, it will not be very interesting to watch such a main character if the author does not make a well-thought-out plot, and I agree with this. The author just made the chakra and the same sharingan weak, with Mangekye Sharingan, the main character will generally become invincible, and you can keep silent about Rinne Sharingan, as well as about Rinnegan.

I will immediately give you a score of 1/5. After all, the Naruto system in the magical world is something very disgusting, because many authors do not even realize the full power of the Naruto universe. For example, any representative of the Ootsutsuki clan will be able to erase this magical world only on a whim, and no one will be able to stop him, just as in the case of Sharingan, the author weakened it by 100 percent. Since chakra and mana are different types of energy, there should be no magical protection from sharingan, this is something alien to the magical world. And if the author wants to justify himself by saying that the chakra and magic coincide for some reason and they work on the same energy, so this means that it is even more difficult to protect yourself from this, then in the world of Naruto, Sharingan - is one of the strongest dojutsu.

Well, the average is no more. The main character is with youthful maximalism, it causes chagrin, not a positive opinion. More holes in the plot, a weak character with hero complexes.

I just don't know who likes a template plot, there are so many of them on the Internet.

It is clear that the plot will be uninteresting in terms of its being a cliche. There are too many similar fanfictions available in the public domain. The main character has no unique features, and if the main character were an immediate representative of the Otsutsuki clan, that would be okay. However, if the author believes it is necessary to gather gene fragments, the author is wrong, as this is a dull and stifling plot element, which is formulaic. And I guess that the main character will have Kaguya Ōtsutsuki as his enemy.

My assumptions about extremely bad fanfiction on English and Asian platforms are becoming a reality. Such disgusting stories featuring characters from different worlds. You can write a story without these "Game Systems". Well, or an author is Asian who has a very poor understanding of Western fantasy. And even more so, they ruined Obito Uchiha. A classic for such works.

If you think about it, 80% of all works related to characters in the Naruto universe look like repetitively digested liquid feces.

I read two chapters of this fan fiction, and I realized that this story is about a typical child protagonist who gets the "powers and appearance" of their idol from anime/manga. However, the author limits the powers of the character from a more powerful world in order to balance the story somehow, but this looks pathetic and disgusting to me.

Well, I read the first chapter, and I was not impressed in any way. Firstly, the cover is a - byte, because in fanfiction, the main character does not look like Madara, even remotely, the character also fills with something childish maximalism.