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Okay so after touching Halime, shouldn’t he clast cleanse on himself or something so he doesn’t accidentally poison anyone who touches him in the same place?
They nodded their heads with smiles as Talila and Hemera stole his arms from the other girls.
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Hasn’t he been deleting a bunch of their soldiers on his travels north?!
When Archer stopped speaking the snake girl was looking at him before bowing her head as she spoke. ''Thank you for helping my kingdom. I'm sure Father will reward you once he visits the college.''
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
NOW SHES A SPEAR MASTER?! Author!!!!!!!!
Ophelia started watching the boy who just fought one of the college's spear masters. She knew he wasn't an expert fighter, but he used his claws with skill.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Sword? Shes wielding a spear! Why did you call her a “renowned sword master” and make her wield a spear?! Author, come with me to the back, I just want to talk I promise.
Samara wasted no time. She lunged forward, her sword a blur of steel as it sliced through the air towards Archer.
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Someone’s gotta keep you on your toes.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
You said he had a mace and a shield, not a bladed weapon.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Cityhe should be City he*. Author, I think we need some space 😒…it’s not you, it’s me.
As they were journeying to Starfall Cityhe admired the scene and lay back to watch the stars.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
You made me lol. 👍🏻
He started to run while the two watched him in shock. Thorin roared in laughter as he looked at Sia and spoke. ''He will be fine so don't worry, I just got to chase the little fucker now.''
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
HER***
She motioned for him to get closer. Archer complied and got closer as she grabbed his little brother and took it into his mouth.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
The Emperors advisor share the same name as his first wife?
After a five-minute wait, Gorgo, her father's advisor, swung open the grand doors, revealing his arrival.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
He can fly faster than a car on the highway right? It would take a car 1 minute to travel a mile at 60 mph. Why did it take him ten minutes?!
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Author…you already promoted him to rank D a while back.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Pretty sure rank D card was Green.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Yea, Author, this chapter is missing paragraphs.
Archer noticed Nefertiti looking around with wide eyes and walked over to her. "Nefi, do you like the treehouse? I made it as a place to relax, and the bracelet I gave you will teleport you here if you infuse mana into it."
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Yo, what question? Something’s missing here author.
After Nefertari's question, Archer looked confused, prompting the older girl to tilt her head. However, he quickly replied with a smile, "No. After dealing with the Nubians and Luxorians, I decided to do some sightseeing in the Nubian Capital."
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
How did they not hear him tearing down the door…
After doing that, he walked down the stairs and entered a large chamber with twenty guards sitting inside sitting around tables. Archer raised his hands, summoning crackling electricity, before casting the Chain Lightning spell.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Where the Plan B?! Anyone notice how absolutely on point and hilarious that branding is? When your pull out game fails (Plan A), got to go to Plan B.
Feeling refreshed he pulled out a blanket and covered the two of them. They lay side by side on the cozy sofa placed on their balcony, their bodies intertwined as they gazed up at the night sky.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
How does he have an older brother if he is the eldest son?!
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Fantasy · NegansPalace
Spider queen? I thought the Chull were lobster like things?
He explained its function and how to contact him if there was trouble, the spider queen agreed to do as he left.
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Fantasy · NegansPalace