Overall I enjoyed the story, but personally I had a number of issues that stood out to me that became particularly strong in the chapters after about 450. 1. Isn’t the author pushing the MC too hard? I can understand the relatively high growth rate given the system, but it's a bit too much. According to what is written, evolution takes hundreds and even thousands of years, but here in six months the MC rushed up two grades at once. 2. MC has already been told several times that her mastery over her skills is very low. Even she herself admitted this several times. Not to mention the techniques she has. In my opinion, it’s time for her to have a training timeskip instead of another evolution. Considering the conditions of the world created by the author, I would say about 5-10 years of training. 3. MC is extremely lucky! According to the narrative, many wait millennia just to obtain a valuable resource. MC just walks by and stumbles upon this one. Flames, higher treasure fragments, rare plants, and so on. And no, the fact that she has a pocket treasure detector will not help the situation. She inordinately often ends up in places where there are terribly rare and valuable treasures. 4. Lack of dialogue. Most of the last chapters are written in the style of MC did something, she realized something. It would have been nice, at the very least, to see deeper interaction with your comrades in everyday life. The same goes for the relationship with the instructor. There is already trust, why hide the capabilities of the system? Just pass it off as, I don't know, the ability to communicate with the moon. A bunch of powerful artifacts have no use for the same reason. 5. Many things seem forgotten! For example, with MC there were a total of 6 foxes in the class. After certain events, the three almost disappeared, as if they had not existed at all. Another example is the broken alchemist's pot. For some reason, a valuable item is gathering dust in a warehouse of sorts, forgotten. 6. Too many names and reactions in one paragraph. At first it was tolerable, but now it looks as if the narrative is jumping around in intensity. I'm not talking about the pace itself, but about the immediate events. Although I think this is purely subjective. 7. Although the author has already said that this will gradually be corrected, I will still mention it. MC is quite smug and naive, especially after the events that happened. Another reason for the timeskip in my opinion. I think that the MC's maturation should be accelerated a little. The same can be applied to her comrades. Reveal them as characters a little more or something. 8. Too much involvement in events. Despite the well-written and fairly large world, somehow at least one important event for the world affected the MC. Most of the events involving the MC were also quite important for the continent. 9. Oh yes, and also overly touchy and self-important characters of higher power. Not all, but quite a few behave this way. Sometimes even among pathetic students. It was as if all the two-faced rats had gathered there. Fortunately, few such characters were seen, but only because the story revolves closer to the MC. I hope the story gets better. Good luck!
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Overall I enjoyed the story, but personally I had a number of issues that stood out to me that became particularly strong in the chapters after about 450. 1. Isn’t the author pushing the MC too hard? I can understand the relatively high growth rate given the system, but it's a bit too much. According to what is written, evolution takes hundreds and even thousands of years, but here in six months the MC rushed up two grades at once. 2. MC has already been told several times that her mastery over her skills is very low. Even she herself admitted this several times. Not to mention the techniques she has. In my opinion, it’s time for her to have a training timeskip instead of another evolution. Considering the conditions of the world created by the author, I would say about 5-10 years of training. 3. MC is extremely lucky! According to the narrative, many wait millennia just to obtain a valuable resource. MC just walks by and stumbles upon this one. Flames, higher treasure fragments, rare plants, and so on. And no, the fact that she has a pocket treasure detector will not help the situation. She inordinately often ends up in places where there are terribly rare and valuable treasures. 4. Lack of dialogue. Most of the last chapters are written in the style of MC did something, she realized something. It would have been nice, at the very least, to see deeper interaction with your comrades in everyday life. The same goes for the relationship with the instructor. There is already trust, why hide the capabilities of the system? Just pass it off as, I don't know, the ability to communicate with the moon. A bunch of powerful artifacts have no use for the same reason. 5. Many things seem forgotten! For example, with MC there were a total of 6 foxes in the class. After certain events, the three almost disappeared, as if they had not existed at all. Another example is the broken alchemist's pot. For some reason, a valuable item is gathering dust in a warehouse of sorts, forgotten. 6. Too many names and reactions in one paragraph. At first it was tolerable, but now it looks as if the narrative is jumping around in intensity. I'm not talking about the pace itself, but about the immediate events. Although I think this is purely subjective. 7. Although the author has already said that this will gradually be corrected, I will still mention it. MC is quite smug and naive, especially after the events that happened. Another reason for the timeskip in my opinion. I think that the MC's maturation should be accelerated a little. The same can be applied to her comrades. Reveal them as characters a little more or something. 8. Too much involvement in events. Despite the well-written and fairly large world, somehow at least one important event for the world affected the MC. Most of the events involving the MC were also quite important for the continent. 9. Oh yes, and also overly touchy and self-important characters of higher power. Not all, but quite a few behave this way. Sometimes even among pathetic students. It was as if all the two-faced rats had gathered there. Fortunately, few such characters were seen, but only because the story revolves closer to the MC. I hope the story gets better. Good luck!
Reincarnated As a Fox With System
Fantasy · godadi