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This is the story that made me weep after a long time. There was too much happening, I definitely didn't like the way Max had to suffer through in both lives to get just a glimpse of warmth for it to be taken away again. It was a lovely story I wished to have a happy ending. The character development was good but the ending kinda felt rushed though.

This book has so many similarities to the book 'Transmigrated as fat young miss', IDK which was posted first and the plot is different but the canteen confrontation is exactly the same with some words modified and competition too. Also she's a sick person, maybe it would be more believable if she took some medicine and exercised a little but from someone who got tired from just running a little (chapter 1) to fighting 3 healthy guys alone and injuring them (chapter 41) with any sort of training is completely unbelievable not to mention impossible.

I'm only halfway through the story and I think, the plot is actually good but story development is annoying. The female character has too many misunderstanding and prejudice on her own and keeps blaming the ML. She uses him time and again but refuses to acknowledge his sincerity. I get that she was hurt before but that doesn't make it okay for her to keep belittling the ML.