Whoa, it's pretty well written, I think you are planning the plot deeply. Just don't Kill my bbg Uncle Neo. I am gonna be waiting for the upcoming chapter. I think you still need to work on world-building like the floors and stuff, I hope you understand
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Whoa, it's pretty well written, I think you are planning the plot deeply. Just don't Kill my bbg Uncle Neo. I am gonna be waiting for the upcoming chapter. I think you still need to work on world-building like the floors and stuff, I hope you understand
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