Arpit_Srivastava_5306

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Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
4 days ago
Posted

I will say author, U picked a good direction with ur idea of the novel. story development is going good. some suggestions though: introduce more depth into the characters. also bit more reasoning on world development. also i felt that there are quite some sudden timelapses like it was going good and then time lapse. i read till ch130 and will say i'Il say there was improvement. good luck on this book

Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
4 months ago
Posted

A really good book for this genre. MC is good,decisive and practical. The character development of all the characters is good and quite realistic personalities. apocalypse setting is also quite realistic with good pacing. love the book. also the system i feel is not broken. suggestion: all the pulls are in favour of mc, try some waste pulls as well, though I don't mind but would feel more realistic love the story,must read. keep up the the good work aurhor

Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
5 months ago
Commented

i really want to see when he will contract that tarantula. Author sir could you please publish more chapters a week.🥹🥹 love the novel, something other than dragons 😉

Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
5 months ago
Posted

really good storyline, mc has an interesting and badass personality. good humour. nice character development. mc's system overpowered but it keeps demanding resources so level pacing is good with the progressing storyline. in short Love it . highly recommend. [img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]

Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
10 months ago
Replied to GreatSage_Arcadia

completely agree for the past few minutes my mind is going like why am i not dropping this the sheer stupidity of mc.ugh😞

Arpit_Srivastava_5306
Arpit_Srivastava_5306
10 months ago
Commented

whats the rush

For time efficiency, it makes a lot more sense to head to a higher-ranked dungeon, which will mean more floors, more monsters, and better drops. This time around though, I couldn't be reckless.

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