This feels really fresh! I quite like the characters and the overall flow of the story. The pacing is a little slow in my opinion, but the detailed world-building and descriptions really make up for it and keep me hooked. I hope you continue writing, author—I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes!
This feels really fresh! I quite like the characters and the overall flow of the story. The pacing is a little slow in my opinion, but the detailed world-building and descriptions really make up for it and keep me hooked. I hope you continue writing, author—I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes!