I saw your post on Reddit and read your first chapter. I thought it would be best to leave a comment here for engagement. But this is a pretty nice first chapter. I like the mysterious cool girl vibe of Hye-Jin (I’m a sucker for cold; no nonsense characters in general). I’m excited to see the progression of Seo Ye-eun’s character and hopefully she gains some more confidence and is able to fight against the bullying. At least it seems from the first chapter that Hye-Jin will be on her side. This has a lot of potential so keep writing and I’ll keep reading lol.
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No problem, keep up the good work! :)