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Golden_Chalice
This is my first work, so I am expecting to learn a lot from this experience. If you like the novel, please leave a review; it helps me out a lot. Thanks
Golden_Chalice
Nice 3rd chapter, try describing the environment more. the pacing is a bit fast.
Golden_Chalice
I have only read about three chapters, but things are building up quite nicely, maybe when I have read more I might change my mind. You could get a bit more creative when describing certain actions and the surroundings of your world.
Golden_Chalice
You could get more creative when speaking about the protagonist, you could say his name instead of always using I.
Golden_Chalice
Not bad.
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original Codex: City of Chaos.
A strange indie game suddenly pops up out of no where. Mysterious disappearances follow. The game codex set in a futuristic earth, implores it's players to forge their own part, providing to progression path but riddled with mysteries.9 Chs 2 Collections
Awesome a new story from the esteemed author of reverend insanity, haven't started reading but i do think it won't disappoint. Just hope Mc won't be evil like fang yuan.
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