I think the pronouns are mixed up
"I'm the one cleaning. Why do you care?" I said bluntly. But he tried to move closer, and I shoved the spatula against his forehead.
Nobody's better than your wife.
LGBT+ · Kim_Seiki
I like it, if you find a cute/hot cover (I vote forbig fluffy wolf with tongue out) and you go back and fix the question and exclamation marks in the first chapters you will get a ton of readers, just careful with too many POVs, some readers don't like them, I don't mind tho. bbye
*dropped
My salary had just drooped.
The Alpha's Enigma
LGBT+ · Cyriacus_Nathalia
same here
My shift ended one night, i didn't go home expecting dinner.
The Alpha's Enigma
LGBT+ · Cyriacus_Nathalia
"i" should be a capital letter
No one is responsible for me, i alone is responsible for myself,.
The Alpha's Enigma
LGBT+ · Cyriacus_Nathalia
Reverse Cinderella plot, instead of being hated and excluded by your family, they love you as their own and SURPRISE, it has a good ending
But as someone who had grown up surrounded by warmth and affection, it wasn't so easy to simply rewrite his entire understanding of his life.
The Dragon Lord's Aide Wants to Quit [BL]
LGBT+ · Jila64
also, who was who? too much time passed
Telling someone to calm down has worked exactly 0 times
[Host, you need to calm down.]
Trapped in the Beastworld Breeder System (BL)
LGBT+ · Unique_Ideas_
no worries, I was just thinking about how there were no mistakes, also out of curiosity, why not use brackets or whatever these are called "" when people talk, it's easier when people read, idm tho
No one is responsible for me, i alone is responsible for myself,.
The Alpha's Enigma
LGBT+ · Cyriacus_Nathalia