Emidio_WT276

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Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
1 months ago
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Going pretty good so far, although now comes the point where this story either holds strong or loses itself. I hope you manage to write Artos‘ character developement and motivation without losing who he is. It is difficult to do with such a personality without seeming like a raging child.

Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
2 months ago
Commented

Would that not have been four touches? Fingertips, Libero, Oikawa, Kyotani? Anyway, Great chapter thus far.

A quick counter. Oikawa set, Kyotani charged from the back row like a released spring. His spike cracked through the air, aimed squarely at Yamaguchi.

Haikyuu: Reborn in Karasuno

Haikyuu: Reborn in Karasuno

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Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
4 months ago
Commented

Isn‘t Hitoka a first year along with Hinata and Kageyama? Or do I remember it wrong?

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Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
6 months ago
Commented

Yes

Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
7 months ago
Commented

+1

Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
9 months ago
Commented

Just want to remind you that there is no sun at this point. So it should not appear in his thoughts. I would just put it in brackets as a reference for the reader.

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Emidio_WT276
Emidio_WT276
1 years ago
Commented

As someone from Germany, you really wouldn‘t use “Mutter“ as a child. “Mama“ would be the equivalent to “Mom“ and more appropriate.

"Hör auf, Mutter! (Stop that, Mother!)" I said in German moving her hand away from my now slightly stinging cheek with a pout.

MHA: Icarus The Copy Hero (Dropped.)

MHA: Icarus The Copy Hero (Dropped.)

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