Would that not have been four touches? Fingertips, Libero, Oikawa, Kyotani? Anyway, Great chapter thus far.
A quick counter. Oikawa set, Kyotani charged from the back row like a released spring. His spike cracked through the air, aimed squarely at Yamaguchi.
Anime & Comics · JustinecArl
Isn‘t Hitoka a first year along with Hinata and Kageyama? Or do I remember it wrong?
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Book&Literature · LazyCaveman
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Book&Literature · LazyCaveman
Just want to remind you that there is no sun at this point. So it should not appear in his thoughts. I would just put it in brackets as a reference for the reader.
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As someone from Germany, you really wouldn‘t use “Mutter“ as a child. “Mama“ would be the equivalent to “Mom“ and more appropriate.
"Hör auf, Mutter! (Stop that, Mother!)" I said in German moving her hand away from my now slightly stinging cheek with a pout.
Anime & Comics · HowSinfulOfMe
Going pretty good so far, although now comes the point where this story either holds strong or loses itself. I hope you manage to write Artos‘ character developement and motivation without losing who he is. It is difficult to do with such a personality without seeming like a raging child.
Artos 'The Demon Wolf'
TV · cregantheblackwolf