Tohera should be Hera
Now that Alton is not at the tavern, he won't go to the casino to look for him. Leaving a message with Tohela was enough.
Goblin Dependency
Fantasy · Floc theory
I belive his/he should be she/her. As it is to represent the buyer and not the seller. She was introduced as she in the chapter before.
Showing a natural smile on his face, he proactively greeted Xia Nan beside him.
Goblin Dependency
Fantasy · Floc theory
And even helped Nosphaleen with the Serpent Emperor Armor, but he had never drawn the Serpent Emperor Armor before - this should be And even helped Nosphaleen with the Whale Emperor Armor, but he had never drawn the Sepent Emperor Armor before
This was ironically the one Armor that Sylas had never drawn. He had drawn the Lion Emperor, Ape Emperor, and even helped Nosphaleen with the Serpent Emperor Armor, but he had never drawn the Serpent Emperor Armor before, not because he couldn't, but because it was both unnecessary and an unnecessary danger.
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec
Should be “with what looked” and not “with with looked”
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The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Lizard Dove should probably be Emperor Dove. As the Emperor Dove went in the dungeon and the Emperor Lizard went to report.
"WHO?!" The Lizard Dove looked toward Fanelei, seemingly only now noticing her presence. "Who are you?! State your name and purpose! NOW!"
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec
Made should be mage
I don't think that any respectable made would recognize that as a dignified magical combat style. In fact, even the artillery divisions have some concerns about your particular methods of deploying munitions." She reminded him.
The World Dragon's Heir
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Is Winter Tree supposed to be Dong Shu?
The blazing fire turned Winter Tree's eyes a fiery red as he stared dumbfounded at the grotesque demon twisting in the mist, his body rigid and tense, shielding the girl behind him without moving.
Goblin Dependency
Fantasy · Floc theory
Felix should be Alix, I think. Unless Felix went with her to see him.
Something else occurred to Felix as he slowly ate his food.
I Will Be the Greatest Knight
Fantasy · QueenFrieza
Trining should be training
An hour later, there were nearly a hundred mythic ranked guards and other militant sorts gathered on the training grounds, where Karl was waiting in the middle of a trining ring.
The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
All through this chapter Lorin and Hai Yin were switched to male.
Hearing the commotion on the deck, Lorin stepped out from the cabin with a cigarette in his mouth, glanced at the distant Twin Canyon, then turned around to take the helm from the helmsman.
Goblin Dependency
Fantasy · Floc theory