Kimberley_Peach

I simply couldn't stop reading the available chapters. I'm not someone who easily get hooked by a story. It will always take me a few chapters before I become truly invested in a book, but from Chapter 1, I was hooked. I just love me a good story that has some dystopian attributes to it, but feels close to reality or what reality could become. I would like for the chapters to have even more "yapping"; descriptions of the surroundings, the characters, their thoughts in between conversations, etc. Not necessarily a bad critique; it's just that I love the story so far and would like more of it to really build this world in my head. Overall, for now, I'm truly invested and look forward to more chapters. <3