JoshCFC

This story has very high potential, I've enjoyed every single chapter so far, I'm a big fan of eastern novels but this has a unique twist on cultivation, paired with the early tragedies, has left me engrossed in the story.

Have I stumbled across a masterpiece? Quite possibly. This is the first time I've read a novel that hooked me as soon as I got done with the prologue, since then every chapter has been great- the writing, story progression, and characters are all top notch. Author, I beg of you, please never drop this!

This has been a very engaging read, good story development, and good writing/grammar. However, even as of the latest chapters, Adyr seems more morally grey than he does a villain, but given his original life, I'm hoping he continues to revert back to that as the story develops.

The MC has possessed the character Leonardo, so whilst it is his son, it also isn't at the same time

This story has an interesting premise, not something I see every day, so I was initially drawn in. Other than a few mistakes in the writing, it's been a decent read. It would be interesting if at least one of his women gets pregnant with his own child in the near future. I also look forward to more development in the kingdom building aspect.

I've been thoroughly engaged with this novel from the first chapter until the current privilege chapters, and as usual, the author continues to deliver with the blood pumping content

I'm pleasantly surprised, shocked even, by how much I'm enjoying this novel. I've never been particularly interested in the advanced tech genre, but this has been a great read from the very first chapter. The pacing is excellent and really helps keep me engaged, making it easier for me to get invested in the story and the genre as a whole. The world-building is good, I like the characters and their interactions, and also like how Alex embraces his bloodlines.