KADEN

I like everything so far, I just need either a character illustration or atleast a damn description. Like I’ve re read th start 10 times trying to find a physical description for the mc. Either I’m an idiot or it doesn’t exist. If u haven’t yet then pls make him cool

Read it somewhere else (novel fire) actually has chapters

I mean realization or revelation, but I feel like u got me. Thanks for liking my comment even if u don’t put it into action. Your a legend and I hope you either continue this masterpiece or write a new one

I’ve been reading and loving the story but can I ask a question. How come Hans and the FL have such a higher popularity count compared to the mc. I like Hans and the nova concept however I don’t want Hans to overshadow the mc. Can someone possibly shed some light on my concerns?!

Also I know it says “read up until chapter 1” - but that’s just because I’m reading on my preferred website with a better format. Sorry for not reading on here

I’m not too far into this but I like everything I’ve read so far. I usually have some small problems with WebNovel plots but so far this is perfect. I have 2 power stones, and will give all the support needed for you to continue writing. I would love some character art for all the main characters, but would rather you take your time to find the right artist then rush. If you need anything or are debating something within the plot, I can’t promise anything to helpful, but I’m happy to try. Good luck with the novel and hope you keep writing!!!

I will pay you money to keep writing this. And I want Mary to have some sorts revelationship about how dumb she’s been, apologize, then finally get to a place where they can build their relationship (romantically). I like Raven, and I know Mary has been nothing but awful. But for me Mary has more potential. To be a crazy yandere sure, but not as delusional as she is now.

Thanks for the reply man. All jokes aside really love your work! can you confirm or deny and of my worries about the future for our mc?!

Thanks man appreciate your comment. I’m definitely interested in some art for the novel. I’ll check out your discord asap. I want to get a little further into the story before I develope the art for the mc. (Like ch15 maybe). Overall thanks for reaching out and you’ll definitely hear from me soon!