Lightless_Paragon

Four chapters in five days. Life is good. (I want three more by the end of the week) Also, I had a questions–I am a very curious guy tbh. So... since Arthur is back and he is probably joining the Song's clan, does the adoption of Mordret occur like in canon?

THE KING , DESCENDANT OF THE PEOPLE OF LIVE, RULER OF THE DARK CITY, PARAGON OF PURITY, ARTHUR LEYWIN IS BACK TO THE WALKING WORLD Our goat is back, and what a way to come back–his aura bringing the people to knee down under his presence and almost single-handedly a gate by himself. THERE IS NOT LIMIT FOR THE AURA FARMING. Also, Ellie number one glazer of Mongrel, she probably talked for hours about the "philosophical" words and view of Mongrel, which honestly isn't even that crazy. On the other hand, I have no idea how Rain actually likes those ships from the movie. Kai and Nephis is wild...😭 ​I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to the fact that Arthur is actually back, specifically Seinsha and Cassie. ​Overall, this was a GLORIOUS chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Also, congratulations on reaching over 500k views. This fic deserved it for how good it is.

I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. I lot of things happened that I didn't even though that would happen. Like I didn't think that Arthur would stay on the dream realm after his second nightmare. Decided to walk through the hollow mountains by himself to go back to the forgotten shore. I didn't even expect that Sylvie was going to be back at his side this early, which made me question how the song sisters reacted when Sylvie transformed herself back into an egg?. And how long had Arthur been in the dream real? Maybe almost three years, probably a year since he separated himself from Sunny, over a year and a few months since he saw the cohort. And are Arthur and Sylvie entering their third nightmare? I also have another question. I'm the og, Cassie rebuild a boat to travel the hollow mountains to search for Nephis. Does she do the same in this fic? I mean, why wouldn't she? She is the childhood friend of Arthur. I have so many questions, but I trust your decisions, Autor. Overall, this chapter was, yeah, confusing, yet interesting.

I didn't expect this chapter to pick up right after Arthur entered his second nightmare, but hey, I'll take it. But to be honest. I would have really enjoyed reading a few chapters (3-5) about how everyone else is doing. Reading about how the cohort is doing, maybe preparing for the second nightmare after some specific "events" or after the second nightmare. Reading how Sunny Reunites with Rain, then he meets Ellie, and then a talk about the things that happened with Arthur, or how Arthur was in the Dark City, etc. Also, seeing Sunny's reaction while watching that atrocious "A Song of the King and his Flame" movie. I'm also super curious about Seinsha and Sylvie, specifically how Seinsha is dealing with her sisters relentlessly teasing her about her relationship with Arthur. But it's all good, you probably already have a plan mapped out for all of this, right? :) I even had an idea of how they would react when Arthur came back to the real world. and of course includes Aura farming. But overall, this chapter was nice. See you in a few days.

The beef between Grey and War God must be absolutely divine😭😭😭. The fact that Grey has already slaughtered two of the War God's vessels is insane. I personally enjoyed the interaction between Arthur with Eurys and Azarax. And to be honest, I believe that a dynamic between Arthur and Azarax could be really interesting in the future. Both of them carry the title of "king"; one was crowned by the people around him, while the other crowned himself. But which one is "better" at definition of a King? Also, I'm still curious about how you are going to write and shape the personality of Regis since Sylvia nor Uto existed in this ff, and they don't have an impact on his personality. Still, I can't wait for the inevitable moment when Regis drops something completely vulgar right in front of Seinsha, another Song Sister, or one of the other female characters from the cohort Overall, this was a great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one in a few days.

Well... it's time to let this marinate for a few weeks. Great chapter btw.