if u have discord my is cocoelcool33 maybe a will open a group on that app.
Oh man, thanks. i all ears
aun falta para que termine :D
¿Cómo veo tu perfil? O puedes agregarme; mi Discord es cocoelcool33.
I knew this was my first web story. (sad face:C). Now I try to improve on the next episodes; maybe on 100th will be a surprise
mine is cocoelcool33
Claro me encantaría un grupito; si puedes crearlo, me incluyes en él. Es la primera vez que me sumerjo en la escritura.
if you like audiobooks, they are also at PocketFM.
The employee didn't notice the motionless body of Agent B-Twelve, hidden among the debris of a nearby abandoned building. The wall, fragile and worn down by time, had collapsed under his weight, leaving him out of sight. The only thing that caught the man's attention was a pool of blood on the ground. "It must be from some fight or maybe a rat this dog caught," he thought, dismissing it without much concern. The dog, on the other hand, had no visible wounds and seemed indifferent to his surroundings, as if something far greater occupied his mind.
Agent's Dog System
Fantasy · Cocoelcool38
that is the idea in some of the chapters :D
We find ourselves in a dark and desolate alleyway, somewhere we left off at the end of the previous chapter. "Congratulations, you have acquired the JORGS system," the voice repeated for the fifth time inside the dog's mind. However, all it received in response were enthusiastic barks: "Woof, woof." The system couldn't understand what its new host was trying to communicate, but before it could process further, rough hands lifted the dog off the ground.
Agent's Dog System
Fantasy · Cocoelcool38
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original Agent's Dog System
Agent B-12, a member of a secret organization, was tasked with recovering a mystical artifact that could prevent a global catastrophe. But when he fails, fate steps in—and the last hope isn’t left in human hands… but in paws. The paws of a small stray dog who just happened to be in the very place where everything began to go wrong. Podbe, the dog, and a group of unlikely allies set out on a daring journey to stop those threatening the fate of the world. Can this curious canine succeed where even the best agent failed? Sometimes, heroes don’t wear capes. They wear collars, walk on four determined paws… and follow a nose that never misses. My first novel :D.206 Chs 11 Collections
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El sistema del perro agente
Es la versión en español de mi primera historia llamada Agent's Dog System. El agente B-12, miembro de una organización secreta, tiene una misión: recuperar un artefacto místico que podría evitar una catástrofe global. Al perder en el intento, y por azares del destino, logra dejar la última esperanza no en manos… sino en patas. Las patas de un pequeño perro callejero que estaba justo en el lugar donde todo empezó a ir mal. Podbe, el perro, y un grupo de aliados inesperados se embarcan en un viaje para detener a quienes amenazan el destino del mundo. ¿Podrá este curioso can lograr lo que ni el mejor agente pudo? A veces, los héroes no usan capa. Solo un collar, patas decididas… y un olfato que nunca se equivoca.206 Chs 6 Collections
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Novaraser, Un Nuevo Camino
La vida de Yuomo, un hombre cercano a los cuarenta años, llegó a su fin de manera trágica cuando fue asesinado en circunstancias extrañas. Pero su muerte no fue el final, sino el comienzo de algo mucho más grande. Su alma fue arrastrada hacia Novaraser, un mundo desconocido donde la magia fluye como un río invisible y los misterios oscuros acechan en cada sombra. Renacido bajo una nueva identidad como Arios, este hombre enfrentará un destino marcado por lo desconocido. Ahora, deberá embarcarse en una búsqueda desesperada por desentrañar los secretos que rodean su asesinato, mientras descubre las verdades ocultas que Novaraser guarda celosamente entre sus bosques encantados, cielos eternos y ruinas olvidadas.8 Chs 1 Collections
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Novaraser, New Path
The life of Yuomo, a man nearing his forties, came to a tragic end when he was murdered under strange circumstances. But his death was not the end—it was the beginning of something far greater. His soul was pulled into Novaraser, an unknown world where magic flows like an invisible river and dark mysteries lurk in every shadow. Reborn under a new identity as Arios, this man will face a destiny shaped by the unknown. Now, he must embark on a desperate quest to unravel the secrets surrounding his murder while uncovering the hidden truths that Novaraser jealously guards among its enchanted forests, eternal skies, and forgotten ruins.11 Chs 1 Collections
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Avocadolia's Last Hope
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In the lush world of Avocadalia, five kingdoms thrive under the divine guidance of Avocios, the god of peace. But when Avocios vanishes without a trace, darkness stirs in the shadows. Prince Paltio, young and untested, must rally his allies—a fierce warrior, a brilliant scholar, and a loyal friend—to embark on a perilous journey. Their mission: to uncover the truth behind Avocios's disappearance, restore balance to their fractured world, and confront the growing threat that looms over all. In a realm where destiny is ripe for the taking, can Paltio rise to the challenge before it's too late?285 Chs 3 Collections
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La Ultima Esperanza de Avocadolia
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En el exuberante mundo de Avocadalia, cinco reinos prosperan bajo la guía divina de Avocios, el dios de la paz. Pero cuando Avocios desaparece sin dejar rastro, la oscuridad comienza a agitarse en las sombras. El príncipe Paltio, joven e inexperto, deberá reunir a sus aliados —un fiero guerrero, un brillante erudito y un amigo leal— para embarcarse en un peligroso viaje. Su misión: descubrir la verdad tras la desaparición de Avocios, restaurar el equilibrio de un mundo fracturado y enfrentar la creciente amenaza que se cierne sobre todos. En un reino donde el destino está al alcance de la mano, ¿podrá Paltio estar a la altura del desafío antes de que sea demasiado tarde?285 Chs 1 Collections
Natasha is a promising case, but the path remains unclear. This book reminds me of an old movie. Great job, and keep up the good work! I hope it has a happy ending.
Natasha Magus
Fantasy · Ebube_Uzoma