Emberlyn...... here I cum
'Thank goodness… this is never going to happen to us,' Raven inwardly reassured herself with a firm nod.
Lackey's Seducing Survival Odyssey
Fantasy · AbiLIon
Good, every arc should have a reasonable amount of length to it. I mean it doesn't matter to me how many times he dies, but if an arc will keep on going on for 400-500 chapters, then that's not acceptable because ultimately it will get boring. 100-120 chapters maximum per arc is perfect
Aether's neck was sliced.
Lackey's Seducing Survival Odyssey
Fantasy · AbiLIon
I personally find this scene shifting distracting. Instead of getting more immersion,it breaks the immersion and tension built up. Not only that , I hate it when the plot keeps on moving from one mystery to another without actually answering the mystery before it. Ultimately all those unresolved threads cause a huge tangled mess, and it destroys the entire plot twist. So it's better if you finish one thing first and then move onto another, it also makes it easier to remember small nuances as to what's going on, since there aren't multiple different things to keep track of
[Author's Note: I know I'm jumping between scenes, and I hope this doesn't annoy you. I just wanted to give you some insight into what the Master is trying to do and how the characters are connected. If you find it confusing or bothersome, please let me know. I won't entertain this style of scene-shifting if it's off-putting. However, I still believe that switching between scenes like this can create a sense of immersion and curiosity from a reader's perspective. So, please feel free to share if you like this approach or not!]
Lackey's Seducing Survival Odyssey
Fantasy · AbiLIon
The author is deleting reviews considering that there are only positive reviews for this novel, which isn't possible. Especially when you consider the fact that this novel has NTR, and I mean Netorare and not Netori
What the fcuk!! If you don't intend to create a harem, then what's the point of having ambiguous relationships? Why disappoint harem fans by giving them hope, only for those hopes to be hopelessly crushed.
I interact with real women. And after not so thorough observations, I came to the conclusion that, in this world finding a loyal partner is extremely difficult, especially in today's time. So I pretty much hate the thought of having a real life harem. But the fantasy characters, can display the utmost loyalty while being a part of a harem, if the author wants them to do so. So I'd rather read a fictional harem story, then to go out and make one IRL. And yes, having a harem and talking about loyalty might sound hypocritical, but it technically isn't since you can have multiple siblings, yet love them all. Similarly you can have multiple partners and love them. Obviously as a man, I am talking about one man and many women not the other way around. Same can be said for those females who like reverse harem.
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The Strongest Student of the Weakest Academy
Fantasy · Lukname