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Taken into account. Thank you. When I understand how to edit everything correctly in English, I will correct everything.
And then her soul began to change. It became colder, more detached even from itself. Memories of her past life became sketchy and hazy. She no longer remembered her name or the faces of those she loved. All she knew was the need to escape. And that need had become an obsession. The only thing that kept him from going insane in this endless void.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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This is "him." I apologize, the translation is not so correct, if possible, tell me where the typo was made.
The soul had no place here. That much was clear. She did not understand alchemy, she did not regret a failed transmutation, she was not bound to the sins of Amestris or the world of the living. She wasn't making a deal. He wasn't trying to play god.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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You're right, sorry for the translation[img=Speechless]
As I walked, I looked over the map once more, tracing the rough lines that marked the regions around Xerxes. To the east, according to the scribbled notes, lay Sin, a distant kingdom known for its advanced alchemy, or, as they called it, alkahestria. Sin was a mysterious land to me, its culture and customs unfamiliar to me, but it was the closest civilization, at least by the standards of the map.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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The pull of the Gate-the constant, long-standing sense of the soul's existence-began to change. It was no longer the soft, distant pull she had felt for so long. It had become stronger. Much stronger. The silence of the abyss, once stifling and unchanging, began to break. For the first time in years, something began to happen.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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"But I am a just being," Truth continued, -" I will give you a chance. When the door opens, take it. But remember - you will be in my debt. One day I will come for you."
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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original Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
In a world ruled by the immutable law of equal exchange, the “Gate of Truth” is a realm where knowledge comes at a terrible price. Plucked from another reality where alchemy is powerless, this soul is thrown into a prison of endless time and despair, surrounded by the cries of those who dare to defy the natural order of things. The forgotten soul finds itself drawn into an alchemical world. In a world where even the greatest minds must obey the Truth, can this stranger soul choose her own destiny - or will she become just another pawn in an endless circle of sacrifice and regret? This fanfic reimagines the world of Fullmetal Alchemist, introducing a new protagonist - one who is not bound by the laws of alchemy, but is forced to confront them in a search for freedom and the meaning of life in a universe that demands balance. English is not my first language. Please understand and forgive. Subscribe to Booty there are more chapters. In the word document. https://boosty.to/crownclown19 Chs 156 Collections
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The Red Door: Alternative history
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David returns to his childhood home, which seemed to be a quiet and familiar place, only to find himself embroiled in a series of creepy and disturbing events. He is faced with an obsessive reality in which the past and the present collide in a dangerous game of survival. David struggles to determine what's real and what lurks in the shadows of his past. Will he uncover the truth behind the house’s dark history, or will the horrors lurking behind the red door consume him? {English is not my native language. And I posted this work just to try my luck in the competition. And to understand how the audience reacts to such handiwork. At the moment, I am rewriting the entire plot of my upcoming book.}1 Chs 4 Collections
It's "him." The main idea was that the very concept of the soul cannot, by definition, have any gender.
At first the soul was sure it could be saved. It was all a mistake, a misunderstanding of cosmic proportions. Perhaps if it had called out to the entity that ruled this place, it would have been heard. Perhaps if she had remained calm and patient, she would have been released.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Through the Gates of Truth
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