Que sem graça, reagindo igual adolescente, eu esperava mais da personalidade que o autor vendeu pra gente...
É tão chato quando fazem isso "ah, o que tem sobre ele que me fez sentir assim?" AH, PELO AMOR DE DEUS, OLHA TUA IDADE, SE FAZENDO DE SONSA
Infelizmente, mal desenvolvido. O autor pula demais a história, os cenários mudam do nada e junto se passam vários anos, mas o autor não avisa em nenhum momento. Sem contar a confusão com os nomes, descrição de personagem e cenário.
O autor nem pra avisar "ah, se passaram tantos anos" ele simplesmente PULOU tudo. Vi nos comentários que ele fala que depois melhora, mas o que adianta se já fez desistir no iniício? kkkkkk
She's commenting the same shit about FenFen again, damn repetitive woman. We get it!
And they keep clinging to her, what have you done to their personality? What the fuck?
Everything was going really well, but the terrible development of their romance ruined the story and I simply gave up. For those who don't care much about romance, it's worth reading. But for me, the main character simply seemed unwilling and lacking in personality, in addition to contradicting herself too much. And this thing about ML shoving the relationship down our throats without even talking was ridiculous.
Seriously? They just got all mixed up and out of nowhere she's his wife. There was no conversation, no declarations, NOTHING. This was a mess, why do the authors insist on rushing and making a bad development?
One thing that didn't make any sense in this novel was the author saying all the time how tired they feel traveling by CAR, even though they were supposed to have improved physiques and it was a 3 hour trip. This only takes away credibility...
Qual é o problema do autor em explicar e deixar as coisas claras? Péssima escrita e enredo...
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