reading at 4 is lowkey crazy but since he can remember everything I can see that happening. but do wish the author say how he so intelligent. and how his mom react to the abnormal amount intelligent and the fact that he can still see with a blind fold. she knows he not using sound as a way to help.
Then he read the letter slowly, his tears, which he thought had already dried, falling again.
Eastern · RogueArvy
the mc choosing to fight make absolutely no sense.
what choice did he have? did he really just ask that after rejecting a better choices. I get that he believes that he shouldn't have to apologize but he smart enough to understand his family is not to really blame when they did there best to find out the truth. and still show affection after towards him.
"Alright... Good…" Razeal muttered under his breath. He hesitated for just a moment, feeling the gravity of what he'd signed himself up for. But what choice did he have? The duel would come, and he'd have his time. That was all that mattered. Time to figure out how to survive and win.
Fantasy · Lazydiablo2
author i have no idea why at the beginning of the story you make the mc to come off like he have some intelligent. than when it come to meetings Villains his brian becomes below average. I hope this don't continue. or if he supposed to be stupid than make it clear and not have people think he supposed to be smart.
don't understand why he try to leave when he thought she did something evil while knowing he going to see the strongest Villain. did he expect them to not have done no evil acts?
the reason why the story feel like it moving slow is because he keep talking about the same thing over and over in different words. I appreciate the details but keep in mind people buy Chapters just to get 1 paragraph of information strect into a full Chapter.
did he not absorb there martial soul?
I am a big fan of these types of novels and normally don't mind reading the same story pretty much but with different characters. I'm not saying this is a rip off of some other story but I'm saying there is literally nothing unique with this story and other similar ones. the mc is plain and average. if you ask me to describe some characters traits of his I would fail. Everything I read so far don't give much to work on. if the mc like this there even less to say about the side character. the golden finger /aka the treasure to help him surpassed people faster is dull too. the fighting is very dull the dialog is very dull the background and world building is very dull. the only reason I still reading this story is good grammar and because I'm bias. I simply like these types of story, and I am hoping the awakening of his material soul is not dull and have some uniqueness. in short Its not worth to pay to read this and even if it were free, I still would hesitate to recommend this story, this would literally be one of my last recommendation if I had to recommend similar stories. slightly below average story/ only people that think this story is good is people that just got started in reading.
he mean to say easiest game ever. I wish the author didn't hand the mc everything, have him work things that would be nice.
Victor blinked at the notifications. "Enlightenment? Bloodline awakening? Man, I didn't even fight, and I'm still getting free upgrades. This is the best game ever!"
I Can Only Cultivate In A Game
Games · TimVic