Daoistcultivators1

This is new and so far I like your approach to the story! MC is smart and diligent. He knows his capabilities and isnt trying to rush to face immortal cultivators. I also hope eventually you show how cultivators are way stronger then grandmaster in general. Usually immortal cultivators can use qi and mortal cultivators can not and cultivators are supposed to be a lot stronger then mortal practioners. I hope you can show why there is a difference since somehow you included that mortal practioners can use qi eventually but you can explain it that their technique allows them to gather impure qi vs pure and this makes mortal weaker then immortal cultivators