PhoenixRisingr

This is my first review ever, but I had to write one after reading this story. I am trying to be nice, and I don't want to discourage the author, but this is horrible. Writing quality like the grammar is bad. However, I don't really care about that when I read a story. What gets me is that the story is the worst. This story has no consistency at all. The main character knows everything. In the first couple of chapters, he has taken over the muggle world from the shadows. Keep in mind he is like 4. No one finds out! No one investigates who his persona is! Think about how stupid that is. Then he goes to the magic world and suddenly out of nowhere he knows all this magic and information. Keep in mind he was exhiled at birth from the magic world. Sure, him being reincarnated and reading the Harry Potter books in his past life gives him leeway, but this is too much. Honestly, I couldn't keep reading after that. I love op mcs, but this is not it. Instead, the author makes every other character in the story have an iq of -100.

The story is amazing in terms of story and worldbuilding in the beginning. However, as the story goes on, the pacing and tension suffer. The problem with the pacing is that the hero goes over new abilities for what seems like 10 chapters, which is boring. Also, as the story goes on, the hero becomes too strong, meaning that there are no threats to the protagonist. Now, this story is still amazing. Some plot points like having the shura god interfere more actively in god tests like he does with the angel test is amazing. Characterization is also great. Right now, at the latest chapter, it just feels like the hero is stomping on everyone. I want him to continue to struggle.