I think it's good, not very coherent, but if it's really your first piece of writing, then it's very, very good.
Anime & Comics · AmN_Not
The story was wonderful and full of promise, but as usual, laziness proved to be humanity’s oldest and most stubborn enemy in the very end.. 😭😭😭
Anime & Comics · kiren_void
I think it's good, not very coherent, but if it's really your first piece of writing, then it's very, very good.
The charismatic Aku! of Detective Conan. [am.n.not]
Anime & Comics · AmN_Not