BigChungus8675309

BigChungus8675309

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BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
4 days ago
Posted

Could be a great story but the author obviously hasn't watched yellowstone and tries to add in some political racial shit that doesn't need to be in it can't keep his story straight in some places its a bit all over honestly and needs some major editing and for them to actually watch yellowstone

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
4 days ago
Commented

cannabis is legal in Montana if you have a prescription

Of course, to keep his family uninvolved, the farms near Yellowstone were being set up to grow cannabis.

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Movies · SrCuervo

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
4 days ago
Commented

ok this part makes no sense at all like yeah its a translation but thats what editing is for yeah? so what is the point of this entire scene? it adds nothing and takes away from the whole story just by existing

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But before he could go upstairs, the bottle in Beth's hand shattered beside Dante, and she said, "Go to hell!"

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Movies · SrCuervo

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
4 days ago
Commented

college doesn't have prom

"Hmm, so you'll miss that thing called prom."

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Yellowstone: Wind in the Smoke

Movies · SrCuervo

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
5 days ago
Commented

aizawa keep your story straight yo it ruins the flow if you don't

His gaze shifted back to Midoriya, who is currently being carried by Dabi towards the exit. 

MHA: The Blue Sun

MHA: The Blue Sun

Anime & Comics · WrightBrothers

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
5 days ago
Commented

it would be aunt... or oba chan

["Hehe. Big sis Fuyumi taught me well."]

MHA: The Blue Sun

MHA: The Blue Sun

Anime & Comics · WrightBrothers

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
5 days ago
Commented

10/10 best girl also why the hell did you skip so much

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
6 days ago
Commented

and this is where you lost me multiple protagonists always ruin a story

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
6 days ago
Posted

good story but way to chinese centric trying to read it i can not really relate to the story at all which is the point of reading so you can be drawn into a different world but it does update regularly

BigChungus8675309
BigChungus8675309
6 days ago
Commented

meh while its entertaining its missing something probably the chinese sensibility thing coming through most westerners can not really comprehend it so its missing something to close the gap i guess