Casey_Nzekwe

Why do writers do that technique where they write 1-5 words per sentence. It’s soooo annoying especially if your listening audibly. It’s supposed to be used in the write settings bro like intense fights etc not every moment, we need more descriptive language, especially in the mcs internal monologue when you use that telegraphic style it makes them seem emotionless and robotic. Hope to see it improved im only a few chapters in but I’ve enjoyed everything else so far

Why does the mc complain about everything, he complains about students he complains about school he complains about the protagonist he complains about training HE ASKED FOR!!!!! It’s so annoying because I’m actually enjoying this but the mcs constant complaining just ruins it

Of all the absolute slop on webnovel especially in this genre it’s got so much potential but it’s painfully slow paced like glacial currently at 113 considering dropping it if it doesn’t get any better, unfortunate because I think the premise is really interesting and well put together aside from the pace