I love the story development and the relationship between Adam & Melon. Writing quality was well written until it started nearing the end then a lot of minor errors started showing up.
🤣🤣🤣
"See? You're beautiful." He watched as Melody smiled and was about to turn to him tentatively so he continued, " But the problem is… you remind me of my brother."
Betrayed By Husband, Stolen By Brother In Law
Urban · har_k
🤣🤣 Elle is too cute!!
"You call Vivian 'Little Auntie,' and I'm her brother, so of course you have to call me 'Little Uncle'!"
Wedding Night: My Disabled Husband Made Me Cry
Urban · 1 Deer Trotting
It was well written, funny, & heartfelt. You'll laugh and you'll cry. I love that Joyce interacts with her readers showing them as much love as we show her. Nobody tops Gramps (Sam) in this story.
Get em gramps. 🤣🤣
Sam stood then. "And let me tell you something," he growled, leaning closer to Winn's face. "If you die and she breaks, I'm coming after your ass in hell. I will squeeze your balls so hard you'll scream like a bitch making even the demons nervous. You'll become the second Jesus just trying to escape me."
Undressed By His Arrogance
Urban · JoyceOrtsen
I love most of the characters. I hate that Syl was taken out. Sam is definitely a fave. He's stern but loving and comical. Ivy God I love her personality.
Ian is a trip. 🤣🤣
Ian Sterling's mouth twitched. The next second, as if he'd discovered a new continent, he gasped out, "Holy shit, Vivian Quinn! You and my little uncle play that rough?!"
Wedding Night: My Disabled Husband Made Me Cry
Urban · 1 Deer Trotting
... and so does the next one. 🤣🤣
"You wish. Ian Sterling and Mason Landon already belong to Vivian Quinn."
Wedding Night: My Disabled Husband Made Me Cry
Urban · 1 Deer Trotting
To say that I'm drawn in is an understatement. I really hope that you update chapters in here. I'm reading on a different platform but it has to many tasks just to read. It's sooooo good I dont want to put it down. 🤍✨️
You had me at salt & pepper scruff.. 🔥 🥵
His shirt sleeves were rolled up just enough to show forearms inked fierce tattoos. His jaw was dusted with salt-and-pepper scruff, and his posture said one thing loud and clear. He needed no one around him.
Submitting to my Ex Uncle
Urban · Bekah_rob