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that's a 55

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Yumix; Unveiled

Yumix; Unveiled

Fantasy · iiPilix

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no one has escaped to this day from truck-kun

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The van sideswiped the rear of Zion's bicycle, sending him violently spinning across the pavement. His body crashed onto the road marker by the roadside, and with a sickening thud, the world around him just seemed to dissolve into chaos. He sprawled on the ground, blood seeping beneath his school uniform, like crimson ink that had stained parchment.

Birth of the Ruler: The Emergence of the Primordial Race

Birth of the Ruler: The Emergence of the Primordial Race

Fantasy · Primordial001

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here our mc of isekai truck-kun

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His moment of tranquility was shattered when his eyes caught a five-year-old girl frozen in the middle of the road, the tiny frame bathed by the approaching headlights of a van that approached like some kind of predator on live prey.

Birth of the Ruler: The Emergence of the Primordial Race

Birth of the Ruler: The Emergence of the Primordial Race

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Kazuo's Revenge

Kazuo's Revenge

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Kazuo's Revenge

Kazuo's Revenge

Eastern · novuskai

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The first chapter is interesting, and Ethan’s story is off to a good start. His new life and emotions are well shown, but the scenes with his mother felt strange for a first chapter. A better warning or a slower build-up to these themes might help. Overall, I’m curious to see what happens next!

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this chapter reminded me jobless reincarnation lol good one