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Author, your novel is great, but I think you have forgotten the collar around Lith's neck. This may seem simple, but it is truly confusing and completely destroys the sense of Lith's identity as a slave of the kingdom.

Dear author, I don't know how you do this and I don't care to know. It's only 80 chapters, but it has made me addicted to this masterpiece. I want more chapters.

This novel is simply perfect: deep, authentic characters, a well-constructed world, an engaging story and plot, and comedy that's among the best I've ever read. Oh... and the protagonist is very appealing. The novel has so much potential, and if it continues at the same level, it will end up being a masterpiece.

man, stop looking for the negative side of everything, just read and enjoy the damn novel. It's not really that difficult if you try.

It seems she will remain like a shadow; she has some remaining will and feelings, but her personality has completely changed, and she is content with her situation. This truly saddened me.

A comprehensive review of this novel after reading 620 chapters. I didn't expect much at first. I just wanted something to pass the time, so I read this novel. Honestly, I was shocked that such a masterpiece was silently buried among other novels. It's essentially a hidden gem. Let's review the main points. Writing: The author's writing style is truly wonderful. The quality is almost excellent, making it easy to understand and visualize the scenes. It gets better and better as you progress. Story: I think this is the best thing about the novel. It's well-crafted and deeply thought out. It's clear that this work, which seems superficial at first, has a very deep story. You get the feeling that the author really knows what he's doing. The depth behind this story easily surpasses many of the most famous novels. There's some minor complexity due to the author's way of revealing facts and secrets, which isn't perfect, of course, but as you read the chapters, you'll understand almost everything. Plot: The pacing is almost as good as the story itself. I personally think it's excellent, as it improves with each chapter. The author clearly drew inspiration from novels like *The Shadow Slave* and *My Vampire System*, but it's not blind imitation; it's simply borrowing ideas. Also, the author doesn't usually force illogical events to push the plot. He did so in one short arc, and although he explained the reasons, they didn't convince me much. In any case, it's just a minor detail with no significant impact on the overall picture. Characters: Most are average, not superficial, but not particularly deep either. This is understandable, as depth isn't one of the novel's strengths, and they are mostly secondary characters. However, surprisingly, some characters possess a lot of genuine depth, such as Damon, Ashcroft, Sylvia, Mattia, Valary, and others. This shows that the author could truly create great characters if he wanted to. Comedy: This is one of the things I loved most about this novel. Sometimes I can't help but laugh while reading certain scenes. It's simply amazing and, at the same time, well-distributed without compromising the seriousness of the events. The main character: Damon is a... well, you could say he has a unique personality. Whether you like it or not, you'll be drawn to him and empathize with him. He's the author's literary masterpiece. The depth of his character is astounding. When you learn about his past and what he's been through since childhood, you truly understand why he became the way he is. I'm not saying his character is bad or twisted; quite the opposite, for someone who's been through what he's been through. You'll truly respect him and perhaps even become attached to him. Also, he's still developing in many ways. That's the end of the review. If you've made it this far, I really think you should give this novel a chance. And to the author, please keep doing what you're doing; you're fantastic.