John_Mcfarland

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I enjoy reading and to a lesser extent writing.

2024-12-02 Joined Global
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John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
2 months ago
Commented

Yeah this has become nearly unreadable. I think this chapter hit my tolerance level. I was enjoying it for a while but now it seems to be adding to my irritation levels. It's a shame this fell flat like that dial tone that was pretending to be an overzealous pancake.

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
5 months ago
Replied to Karanvir_Chauhan

He had to share a few years, cause communism.

This process was his dark secret—a horrifying, efficient healing method he had discovered five years prior.

Marvel: Sovereign of Steel

Marvel: Sovereign of Steel

Movies · _Shadowscale

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
5 months ago
Commented

My sense of humor does not exist on the same wavelength apparently. This chapter was pure cringe for me. Not judging it as bad or good. it's just not for me.

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
5 months ago
Posted

I found this by happenstance but it has been a fun read. I am particular to intelligent characters and this delivers thus far.

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
5 months ago
Commented

Thank you for this. I've enjoyed it.

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
6 months ago
Commented

what kind of plan..., you know what... I Don't care

He zoomed in on the red-marked sector. "Our target's being held by the Scavs in this block here. Once we breach, Maine's crew moves simultaneously. Two teams, two fronts — we crush 'em between us, fast and clean."

Cyberpunk 2077: Playing as Roronoa Zoro

Cyberpunk 2077: Playing as Roronoa Zoro

Video Games · ElvenKing20

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
6 months ago
Posted

I had a difficult time with this. The overarching concept is fine. However, the telling of it is at best confusing and at worst nonsensical. Interpersonal interactions are illogically approached and I just don't feel any reason to care about the characters or their development. This one is a no for me.

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
7 months ago
Replied to ClockworkDream

I dunno, I've had algae based nutrition packs... they definitely taste like betrayal. Not too sure about the silence having teeth though. That is an interesting idiom

"Tastes like betrayal," she said aloud. Her voice didn't echo. The silence here had teeth.

The Devil Walks Again

The Devil Walks Again

Anime & Comics · Obsessive_Lord

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
8 months ago
Replied to DuskRav3n

I searched for that because I was curious and found the Honda Monkey which is a special edition mini motorcycle. So, maybe the monkey edition is just an odd somewhat usable special edition? No clue...

"Am I some kind of monkey-edition multiversal lifeform?"

Cyberpunk: Infinite Progress Begins with Arasaka

Cyberpunk: Infinite Progress Begins with Arasaka

Video Games · Dao_Of_Heaven

John_Mcfarland
John_Mcfarland
11 months ago
Posted

I am not really interested in HP so I never bothered looking at this but I was bored and finished my work for the day and thought why not. I am glad I did. The story is great. I like intelligent characters. He has faults, makes mistakes, and has had questionable judgement but honestly it makes him more human and less the typical single-minded, immature OP MC that seems to be so prevalent. Changing perspective is just part of growing up. Good job with this.