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All the women he's been with so far have only been for commercial purposes or some other kind of ulterior motive. Even if he develops some kind of feeling for her, they don't know what that feeling is because there are almost no emotions in this world. The main character knows them, he knows what he feels, but he doesn't explain anything; it's just based on commerce, he only thinks superficially. I think it would be a very good series if he had a little emotional development. They constantly talk about Dao and see their bodies as trash. Then why do bodybuilders exist, for example? It's ridiculous. You need to explain this to them properly and make them understand the importance of their bodies, because they all see their bodies as trash.

The series is very good; the world is well-designed, the female characters are well-developed, the power system is well-designed, and the writing is good overall. Only two things bother me: he sees all the women's bodies as trash, and the main character is emotionally trash. He could make them fall in love with him with just a few sentences, maybe not, but he could even declare them his woman, but he only treats it as a business. You think his character will change later, but nothing changes. If he's been in this world for over 30 years, he should be a little more mature, but he only thinks with his lower body. There's no emotion in this series, just one-night stand-style sex. I want the author to show the main character more respect for emotions and to somehow explain to women the importance of their bodies. If these two things happen, I think there are very few better series on this site than this one.

I love the series, I just thought it would be even better if you did what I suggested.

I think the main character is too focused on sex; he should pay more attention to emotions. Even a few words could change things, and he should share his inner thoughts, like, "If we don't enjoy life, immortality has no meaning." That alone could change their perspective on Dao. A few words of affection would also work; he never explicitly said "I love you" to any of them, and I think he should, because all women see it as a transaction. If he tells them he loves them and proves it with his actions, they might fall in love with him; otherwise, they'll see everything he does as a transaction.

I think the main character is too focused on sex; he should pay more attention to emotions. Even a few words could change things, and he should share his inner thoughts, like, "If we don't enjoy life, immortality has no meaning." That alone could change their perspective on Dao. A few words of affection would also work; he never explicitly said "I love you" to any of them, and I think he should, because all women see it as a transaction. If he tells them he loves them and proves it with his actions, they might fall in love with him; otherwise, they'll see everything he does as a transaction.

I think the main character is too focused on sex; he should pay more attention to emotions. Even a few words could change things, and he should share his inner thoughts, like, "If we don't enjoy life, immortality has no meaning." That alone could change their perspective on Dao. A few words of affection would also work; he never explicitly said "I love you" to any of them, and I think he should, because all women see it as a transaction. If he tells them he loves them and proves it with his actions, they might fall in love with him; otherwise, they'll see everything he does as a transaction.

Author, don't tell me you'll leave this book unfinished. This might be the most realistic Naruto fan fiction series so far, don't leave it unfinished.

There is only a business relationship with all women. Will there be any emotional development? Or if someone else comes along and offers something better, these women will go to him.

All the girls only have a business relationship with him — if someone else came along and offered them something better, they’d sell their bodies without hesitation. Will the main character make them fall in love with him, or will it just stay a professional relationship?

For those who want to find the original:The Overbearing Uchiha Who Drove the Third Hokage Insane! I liked the series, if you want to read it, you can read it on the Wtr-lab website.