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Mifbelle
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The Story is written so well. But the story leans heavily on explaining and gaining powers . The main character got OP too fast and got absurd powers. It would have been better if the author explored the lore, making the mc strong gradually, with enough struggles. The First few chapters promised an epic fantasy, and then it turned into lame joke and unnecessary power slope.
"Prince Theodore you are now exiled from the Empire for molesting your brothers fiance!"
"Destroy his mana core!"
Theo got accused for a crime he didn't do. All of this was a part of plan by his brother and the nobles to get rid of him. They didn't want a slaves child to become the Emperor.
"Was that all necessary ? I have never wanted to become the Emperor.
Or there is more to their scheme?
Follow Prince Theodore's journey where he makes his own way out with a destroyed mana core to fight the Empire, and uncovers truth about his mother's mysterious death.
Earth was getting destroyed all of a sudden.
Did God die suddenly or got killed?
Shokal, an ordinary struggling man asked the question . Whose first day of getting a job was the last day of Earth!
He Nonchalantly asked God to give him a chance to live his unlived happy life elsewhere.
To his answer God gave him the last part of "Earth's Essence" and sending him to a different world, by breaking the eternal law of time and space.
He's getting reincarnated in a different fantasy world with the skill 'Keeper of dimentional storage'.
Can he unravel the mystery behind Earths ending while surviving a in a whole different world??
The Story is written so well. But the story leans heavily on explaining and gaining powers . The main character got OP too fast and got absurd powers. It would have been better if the author explored the lore, making the mc strong gradually, with enough struggles. The First few chapters promised an epic fantasy, and then it turned into lame joke and unnecessary power slope.
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