harem is for horny people
is there any academy or tournament arc
if possible, can you stop bolding words? it's annoying. overall tftc
nope
Single fl ?????? i hope so. everyone does.
I've read till chapter 12. so let me give a honest review. World building is good and character interactions may be a little childish and cringe but are emotionally fun. I hope author make the novel more serious. the power system is also very good, not the typical chosen mc. there was a massive problem in chapter 9 i think. like when he got shot by his mother his sister 's reaction was..... what was that dialogue? a showcase of shock. and his mother wanted to test her and him in the middle of a wedding? by attacking? not really good it was mentioned that they are grand dukes. so the grand duke himself should be immensely powerful. but you wrote it as if he's a clown( in the spar like fake crying. is he some 15 years old teenager?) Mc's personality is very good, though I hope he won't be always that physco, it's unrealistic. like you can make him more cold and indifferent. take more time and make it more mature. I'll give a five star though i love your concept. keep going.
hi. I think this novel will reach the top ten in no time. continue your amazing work. and if there was something i wanted to point out, is the update rate. although it's decent for a known novel, for you who has started recently, it's a little bit down. consider releasing 2 or 3 chaps a day.
update more. this is good and has potential
has anyone got news about him? i mean someone close to him
One of the best new novels. keep up ur good work and update more. definitely recommended. 1-the mc's personality is good. 2- he's now weak but will be overpowered in future. 3. I don't know about romance if it's harem or not . i hope not. but i hope the fl is someone good not some annoying arrogant noble who just wants mc for his power. [I hope fl will be someone to accept mc when he's weak] 3. world background is very good and so the power system. 4. maybe update stability is below average that's why the novel hasn't got that popularity yet. overall it worths our time.
Primordial Heir: Nine Stars
Fantasy · FallenMage