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Uppie
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
Uppie
Makun stayed seated. "You saw something. Tell me what it was."
Grand Ascension
Fantasy · LordTsar
Uppie
Good job author! [img=More pls]
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Grand Ascension
Fantasy · LordTsar
Uppie
Snow? Come on, now I’m convinced this is ai. I was enjoying this, outside of the frequent sequence breaks…
A thunderous explosion of fire, blood, and entrails burst outward, shredding the beast from the inside out. Chunks of flesh rained across the snow. The serpent's dying scream was cut off instantly, gurgling as steam and smoke poured from the cavity where its core organs used to be.
SSS Talent: From Trash to Tyrant
Fantasy · Klotz
The pacing problem and the lack of anything concrete happening in the first 30 chapters really killed it for me. Excellent writing and such, but there’s no substance behind the mass of words I have to read for anything to happen. [img=Almost asleep]
Grand Ascension
Fantasy · LordTsar