ventura_workaholic

You are correct that the author can do what they want. If this was real life, all of the bad would have happened. However none of the good would not have. She would have been locked away in Zaden's pack until birth and forced to continue being a servant/slave. She would not have gone to the royal pack and beaten. She would have had several kids and died by 40. done just misery and torment. my biggest problem with all of this are the labels of the story with #weak to strong and #enemies to lovers. So many of us were expecting a story with some basic guidelines and an unhappy ending and transmigration were not one of them.

I have been following this novel for a while. I know that it is a dark story with a lot of ups and downs. I have been waiting for Jasmine to get her due...after all of the suffering, struggling, and injustice. I was waiting for her to finally emerge as the goddess she is and fulfill her destiny. I however wasn't expecting a transmigrating twist. And honestly it has no place in this story. However if the Author feels that Jasmine deserves an old fashioned Shakespeare tragedy where everyone dies and the main character "magically switches bodies"...fine. I will be writing a scathing review on the main reviews of the novel warning future readers of the change of story. A word of caution to the author. look at all of the anger and frustration from the highest paying tier of privilege readers. Most of us have decent story/plot intelligence. And almost all of us are pissed. So my recommendation is to rewrite this chapter and let Jasmine survive in her body (or better yet partially unlock her wolf). If you want Apollo to not be a red head...fine. The rest of your planned storyline could basically stay the same with this change. Just give in and start over.

I have throughly enjoyed this story so far. I have also joined the privileged chapters in the past. I would do so I the future once you begin writing on this novel again. I am confident that many of your fans will return to this story once you become consistent on this story again. However please have planned plot outline before starting up again. That way you don't fall into the never ending story that just stops. Please eventually give us an end that Ava and Lucas deserve.

I'm not very good at leaving comments often enough. So I apologize. I wanted to thank the author for wrapping up the story. I can't count the number of books here that just stop part way (not even halfway). So thank you so much for finishing. I enjoyed this book. Was the pacing a little slow in the beginning? Yes. Did it get better halfway through? Definitely. But I like epics so no big deal here. My only recommendation to the author would be; to write most of the book you want to write as a draft first. Then work out things before starting the publishing process. Do it for enjoyment first and foremost. Since writing is for fun, the final product will be of high quality. And people will enjoy it more. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

I just found this story recently. While I am not a huge fan of "system" stories (yes I have read many), I find this one better than most. For me, it is refreshing to read a monogamous, action, end of the world romance instead of the harem stories. I know that many long epic stories don't always sell well, but I for one love them. Author please makesure you finish this story.

This was a touching chapter.

I just caught up. I don't like following books that are still being written. However I am enjoying this book. So my requests are to finish the book, and to continue the pacing that you have settled into now.

sorry to be "that guy", but Jin Talon was a leader of the 4th Family. Their ability was exploding blood.