Hello guys! I have an exam this week, I might be occupied for a week or two! We'll be back soon!
The start was a bit confusing but it was interesting, the MC feeling was described very vivid and there's a lot of surprises, especially when I saw "ZoroArk". Good luck Writing!
Strong start off, simple and easy to understand, The world setting was interesting to have heros and villians' family, since the lastest upload was chapter three, I have nothing much to say but to wish you good luck on your writing!
I might not update tomorrow, I got dungeon and dragons to dm. Any thoughts on the chapter? maybe prayers?
Hi Hi~ I'm the author here, It's kinda shameless to rate my own book five out of five but I hope it is the best out there. First of all, English isn't my first language, so better expect some weird grammars. Second, The story is kinda in shambles, the world building is extremely large, it's borderline alternate reality at the point, so you might encounter a lot of jargon. Third! I'm still in highschool, might be a little busy. Last thing! you could comments all the question here, I'd hope to answer all of it.
@tired123 I'm sorry
He was trying to find a polite way to say "hot". Lith could still remember Elina's naked body when he was an infant, and she had aged very well.
Fantasy · Legion20
8:21 PM, 8th January of 2026
*"He is alive! I did it! I managed to save your boy's life."* (please, remember that * means words that Derek is not capable of understanding.)
Fantasy · Legion20
Star-struck haha, you got it, right?
She was about to get her spine ripped off, but a falling star struck the knight's head from above.
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