Thanks for the feedback! I can definitely see why it feels that way. I was aiming for an intense connection under unusual circumstances, but I'll keep the pacing in mind as I continue revising. I appreciate you taking the time to comment.[img=recommend]
"May I touch you?" he murmured low, like he was holding himself back with great effort.
Urban · cherieacher
Hi, thank you for your insight. I will look into it if I need it. Thank you.
Thank you. I'll look into it.
Hi, thank you for reading. So far, the only challenge I'm experiencing is time. Making sure the next chapters are written and published daily, whilst balancing it out with my day job. And may I ask, what the idea would be? I'm always open.
Hi, thanks for the offer. I'll get back to you if I need one.
Glad you're loving it! Thank you for reading.[img=recommend]
Sure2, I would love that. I'd check it out.
Thank youu, glad you enjoyed it.
Hi, thank you. I'll reach out to you. But feel free to reach out to me here, if you'd like.[img=recommend]
Thanks for pointing it out! The hospital isn't closed on Sundays. Her friend was actually complaining that Elena has to work on a Sunday, no less, after already doing so many shifts. I can see how that wording was confusing though, so I'll make it clearer. 😊
"So," Pippa continued, her eyes drifting over my outfit, "why are you still wearing your scrubs? Don't tell me you have a shift today. On a Sunday, no less."
Trapped Between Empires
Urban · cherieacher