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The chapter is a bit long, maybe too long, I think
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Personally, I think u should deal with the spacing
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Hi~, cool start
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A very gud book. I love the characters, the worldbuilding and the power system. Especially the power system, give me a great RPG experience. Anyway, it's gud
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Great chapter!
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U don't have to emphasis it twice btw
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A gud book. Love how the character interact and how everything goes. Maybe with a bit improvement in spacing and length, this will be a better one.