right?
The winged beastmen and the bald headed man stood on the side as the two men who were constantly joking about Damian finally stopped and unsheathed his sword. The brown haired man stood in front with sword in hand while the black haired man was lazily resting on butt of his spear, they weren't at least ganging up on him. Damian took out his short sword from it's sheath, he had decided to keep his word out since there was a chance that these people might try to capture him.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
first read wish me luck! :)
It hurts so much!
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
ok ci sta, infatti mi sembrava un po infattibile però che ne so, tipo su advent(ancora non lho finito) essendo le emozioni molto importanti poteva starci(visto come ci si può sentire ad essere lasciati ecc) comunque posso capire che non piaccia effettivamente prenderebbe troppo spazio, comunque scrivi veramente della bella roba peccato io non sia una cima in inglese ahah
can I suggest you something for future novels?(sorry for my english) i dont know if it could be good or not but for me it would be more realistic if the MC(or other characters) dont get involved with one and with that one forever(like a children thought of love), but maybe if sometimes he/she gets rejected or a relationship end at some point just like real life. (dont know if people would like it, it would need to be well written to not seem like a pink romance, but for me it would be more realistic and immersive) sorry for the message and for my english, i wish it will be usefull.(im italian just like you(i think))
claimed
PoE: Power over Ethernet
Power over emotions.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI