shajiru

Kaal way of thinking and quickly finding solution of every situation is just amazing This chapter was fun to read and a bit sad too

Your writing always makes me want to become a writer, too keep up the good work

guts and will of kaal makes him different than others your way of describing the situation and everything is just admirable

The ending made me felt relieved Rex's will to never give up even gave goosebumps This was the perfect example of hardwork pays off

you nailed it!!!!!

Your writing is so beautiful because you always know the right word for the right moment this chapter was soo good specially when kaal was trying to stand that part was my fav overall a must read novel

This part was unexpected fr Kaal and her mothers bond is soo cute and heart warming It was fun reading it

the twist at end is soooo good cant wait to see what happens next kaal way of thinking is the only advantage he have now the way he can thought of a plan in such a short time is surprising

the prologue was soooo good the way the words were choosen to express the feelings is admirable i really loved this chapter looking forward to next one

Diablo's kukuku shion and rimuru wanting to teach nirvakal a lesson was the most cute and funny part this chapter was sooo good as it had slice of life and fun part too now cant wait for next one hope it will be good and fun too