I liked the chapter, and Shadow Dance is fine being capped at the 3rd step, since he literally has all the knowledge and puts that into practice. It doesn't have to be perfect; you can always flesh things out in later chapters, they'll interact a lot more in FS, and Neph is probably still suspicious at this point anyway. Perfectionism only paralyzes you into inaction and countless rewrites (trust me on this one 😭) Anyways, thanks for the longer chapter!
holy...
[Aspect: Shadow Slave has evolved.]
Book&Literature · boiii_man
thanks for the chapter
Nice chapter, I’m curious how they’ll get out And Cassie x Harus Duo seems really cool, lots of development waiting to happen
nice one
ouuu shii
Shadow Fragments: [204/1000].
Book&Literature · boiii_man
"I know you're there, Mordret."
Book&Literature · boiii_man
Good first chap I don't mind AI polishing, as long as it doesn't have that atrocious ChatGPT accent... You were just in survival mode... and that's growth! 🌱✨️
Will read it
This was great
Shadow slave: Deep in time.
Book&Literature · NightSinger