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I WILL work on it
I am not rating it 5 star , because there is a lot of things you can work on ,but because your story concept is good,iIam hoping good things from you in the future,keep working hard ❤️
your concept is good 👍🏻 but you have to work more on it ,I will out few changes you should make ,1st you should improve your para allignment,too many small lines seems like a poem ,which can irritate readers ,and also writting quality can be better, otherwise it's good,just keep writing 👍🏻 it will eventually improve
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nice starting
hey your novel is very good,it has great potential so I added it to my collection. keep writing, don't stop,I am being your 1st proper supporter . hey you can also check my new book"The Eternal Clan:Rise of the 1st Ancestor" from my profile.give it a read add it to your collection. also don't forget to leave your thoughts on my novel in the comment section,if you like it support me with power stone. we new writer brothers should look out for each other .
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original The Eternal Clan : Rise of the First Ancestor
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The "Ren Clan" is on the verge of extinction. Ren Kai, the eldest son of a dying clan, inherits a mysterious ancestral book containing the life knowledge of "Ren Xuan, the Eternal Ancestor". The book grants no instant power. Instead, every major breakthrough unlocks a new chapter—revealing cultivation techniques, forgotten knowledge, resources, and secrets capable of changing his clan's fate. But Ren Kai soon learns his ancestor's greatest lesson: “No one can conquer the heavens alone.” From a forgotten minor clan to a force that shakes the Lower Realm and beyond, Ren Kai will build his clan through blood, war, sacrifice, and legacy. "He will not ascend the heavens alone. He will take the Ren Clan with him."38 Chs 112 Collections
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Rise Of Industrial Tycoon
China is the world's largest producer and consumer of machine tools, but its development of the most advanced precision machine tools has been hampered by technological blockades imposed by Western countries. A young engineer from twenty years in the future, in an era full of opportunities and challenges, wants to change the situation in this alternate dimension, also called China, where the high-end machine tool market is monopolized by foreigners, relying on his familiarity with various CNC machine tools of the future. When he actually started, he realized how difficult it was to pursue independent research and development in high-end fields in China. Talent was monopolized by the state, funds were never enough, and rogue state-owned enterprises would come knocking on his door with any good technology, demanding technology sharing. Supporting factories had to develop everything themselves, and partners said, "To hell with technology development, making money is the only way to go..." How can we change this situation?40 Chs 15 Collections
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