Robin_Gorrilla

Robin_Gorrilla

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Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
9 months ago
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this book has ended, the author moved on

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
10 months ago
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This chapter is, frankly, quite uninteresting. First, ytf i spent 5 minutes reading about birds that went to sleep right after the 5 minutes? The fight/detention looked promising, but there was no mention ever again. I see no reason for emma to ever venture the whatever-mountain except for a promised unknown reward. If I picked up a mysterious box like that, i would just throw it in the bin.

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A Salty Wish

A Salty Wish

Fantasy · Sir_Kig

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
10 months ago
Commented

TFTC, tho there r a significant number of typos, likr thron bushes

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
10 months ago
Commented

TFTC, are we sure dr. emmmanuel is not the author tho

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
11 months ago
Commented

thx, i was wondering how the researchers would react. Poor Dr. emmanuel. as a writer, i usually aim for 2k wrds/chapter.

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
11 months ago
Replied to Daoist_shini

this is the wrong context...

"I will enjoy this, very, very much," I said.

Leo : The Lion King

Leo : The Lion King

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
11 months ago
Commented

maybe Leo shoulda went like "i faced 8 lions since i returned. I killed 7, the last one fled. You will be wise to do the same and save me the hassle. also, hana is right that leo wants to bang his sisters

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
1 years ago
Commented

whats common between lions, greek gods, and ancient egyptians? incestry

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
1 years ago
Replied to Elsa_Clarkk

Thank you for your review. You do have some very insightful evaluation of the language. However, there are a few things I would like to clear up 1. Ardoni don't have hair 2. There is such a scene as you describe, only you have to complete the novel to reach it. 3. I am really sick and tired of comic book artists trying to commision my work. As a fanfic, the Songs of War ip is owned by Squared Media (BPS) and I do not plan to monetize it in any way

Robin_Gorrilla
Robin_Gorrilla
1 years ago
Replied to lea_fy

Yes, my idea to write this revamp is because a lot of the animation after season 2 is very... unsatisfactory. And as I mentioned, the original script also has some glaring weaknesses

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