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5 months ago
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what's this Indian setup???? and how could he use a cursed technique with chakra???????????

5 months ago
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what's his power system? chakra or cursed energy? at first you said that the system turns malice into chakra but later you made the mc use black flash, a cursed technique!!!

5 months ago
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come on, use your mind for a second how could konoha reseal the 9 tails into another person(Tsunade) in just a few minutes? and even then, how could she control the 9 tails so easily and so soon right after sealing it?? it doesn't make sense... and now you are telling us that Hiruzen survived that fatal attack from satoshi!! what? you think he's Hashirama?? and kushina also survived!!! how did she survive? you just wrote that Tsunade became the 9 tails jinchuriki, and i'm very sure she wouldn't be able to heal kushina while sealing the 9 tails into her... so how?? enlighten us...

5 months ago
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this is confusing... one chapter you make it sound like ulquiorra being the mc's subordinate is widely known, another chapter you make it sound like they're from 2 different crews..........😑

5 months ago
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in the one piece manga, there aren't many who awakened their devil fruits, these people include (doflamingo, katakuri, luffy, the 5 elders[gorosei], rob lucci and probably kaku... i don't remember if there's anyone else) so i don't understand, why are you making so many characters with an awakened devil fruit when it wasn't even stated in the manga??

5 months ago
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it's peak... attacking kushina to unleash the 9 tails and make it distract some powerhouses... but if this confrontation ended without at least one powerhouse dying in addition to kushina, it would be kinda pointless... the only thing i don't understand is why did Might Duy appear at such an important event? he's still a genin, the eternal genin, before the 3rd ninja world war, no one knew about his strength(the 8 inner gates), so i don't understand why was he there???? and don't forget, Duy is much weaker than his son Guy, he was barely able to defeat the 7 ninja swordsmen after releasing the 8th gate, so you should avoid a situation where Duy is suppressing a SUSANO, he would barely be able to fight on equal grounds for a very short time and thanks for the chapter🔥