Erich_B

Man, this story is so good. It’s the bee’s knees—no, but really. All the other Hazbin Hotel fanfiction is mostly wish-fulfillment garbage: no real relationships, just a guy who gains power stupid fast. But this? It’s a real story. You can imagine it being part of the actual series. This is what I call fanfiction. I really respect a story that sticks to one girl—nothing fake, nothing forced—just real character development and romantic development. The only problem I have with this fanfiction is that the chapters are short, and the only reason I noticed is because it’s so good. I don’t want the author to stop, especially since they update super frequently.

I am thoroughly enjoying the story it’s entertaining and the characters feel real like robots really excited to see him start singing, and his future relationship with his family. It would be really cool if they weren’t villains, but you know just as jaded as humans are

Very good story thoroughly enjoying it honestly it’s not lacking anything except romance. I understand that they’re young, but it doesn’t change the fact that they can’t be friends and the romantic interest is clear so if you have plans for it, that’s great, but if you don’t ask, just adding it because stories with that romance content to get boring quickly

The story is great. I fully love it. Yes, there are some cringe parts, but they enhance the hilarious moments it’s not so cringe that I regret my life decisions and it’s utterly hilarious. I’m walking around my Walmart giggling to myself like a school girl in love getting weird. Looks by grandma‘s and still I can’t put the story down. This truly is my favorite fanfiction right now

Honestly, it’s a very good book. Very good premise. I am enjoying it a lot the grooming it’s real, but it’s sweet and a little gross but still pretty sweet but I wish he had a better relationship with Bruce instead of friends more like brothers.

It’s a great story I like listening to it like reading it disappointed me Time I even paid for the Patreon, but you see that there is the problem. The story is great, but at this point, I don’t trust the author to be consistent. I trust them to make a great story if they continue riding it, but I don’t think I would pay for Patreon again Unless they got consistent for a month or two, but if they really do get consistent, I would happily give them my money.

Great story honestly I have no complaints about it. Really good writing really good development. I’m enjoying that a lot but two things if you made a Patreon, I would give you my money. And for love interest you should make it one of the girls already in Black Clover instead of one you added in and created a story for. My suggestion use. Nero or Noelle I feel like that would be fun, especially Noelle

Great story this one feels a lot more put together and it flows a lot better. The last one felt like you were just following the original story but this one feels unique. I am really excited for more.