RealPluto82k

Quite honestly the story is promising from what I’ve read so far n it’s due to the fact I replaced the mc age in my head when I read, which was the only point in the beginning that continued to throw me off because as much as I try to throw logic out the window in fantasies, I can’t throw away commen sense… 1. Soldiers wouldn’t follow a child into a death battle especially one who hasn’t experienced one yet 2. Take into account envisioning when a reader reads, that’s mainly y I changed his age in my head I simply couldn’t see his body of age doing the things he did🤷🏾‍♂️ besides that it’s promising