Yeah, I think "at the exact moment" confused you all. I meant that Victoria's deal cooled off Martin so he was calmer about Kill Clause's shocking approach
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Oh, "at the exact moment" yes? Well I meant here that Victoria's deal cooled off Martin. Otherwise, he would act different
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What mistake?
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Nah, it's fine brother! This jealousy arc is needed for something greater down the line, but I can't keep it up if its painful or boring to read. I want my book to be enjoyable first and foremost. I'll wrap it up properly and thank you for telling me this!
Martin's jealousy is too much to read. Is that it?
Yes. I forgot about that
Thank you for spotting this. Yeah, I decided not to involve Raze Dawg more because it'd prolong the battle and I think it's best to wrap this arc up and move on! I'll fix contradiction when I find time
He did not have a live view of the battlefield. He could not see who was overextended, who had slipped from the stone, who needed a pull, or which lane was already lost. Some commands needed instant reactions, and if he pushed himself into the command flow now, he would only make the second shotcaller hesitate.
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We don't ask ladies how much they weight, do we? :D
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